Hi! Day 1, this is exciting! And... I've done it. This is poem one.
Hopefully subsequent poems will be easier to write... and make more sense
Aircraft
A thunderous plane flashes over at night.
The pressure up there
Can turn men
Inside out.
Frozen
With fear.
Never have I ever
Been as terrified as this
In my life.
Hopefully subsequent poems will be easier to write... and make more sense
Aircraft
A thunderous plane flashes over at night.
The pressure up there
Can turn men
Inside out.
Frozen
With fear.
Never have I ever
Been as terrified as this
In my life.
Ah NaPoWriMo!
ReplyDeleteHopefully we'll all be able to manage it. I love the poem it's simplistic but has an emotional meaning/overview. I guess NaPoWriMo really gives you the chance to play with different styles/formats with poetry. I look forward to reading more!
I see some Italian literature influences... :) beautiful! ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks Abbie! :D
ReplyDeletePaolo- Thanks! Yes, and, the weirdest thing is, I didn't even realise I had (sort-of) copied the last lines from Ungaretti, until I had published it, and re-read it. Promise!